Saturday, August 6, 2011

How is the (uber short) prologue?- Fantasy?

Well, I think the story has a great plot. If you want to have a prologue though I think you should make it moredetailed, like describe the land and who the people are, and you could've made the letter sound like it was really written back in the old days. Other than that I think it's really good! Good Luck!

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